"Tyler, your song is awesome and very weird and I totally love it.
It's totally original and unlike anything I've heard before. Really cool.
That being said, I think there's some work that needs to be done on it.
so this is a new kinda rock/metal song I wrote, However it is partially in japanese ( really bad at that), It does contain screaming/growling so if thats not your thing I understand https://soundcloud.com/streamSee More
"Tyler, this song sounds SO AWESOME!!! It really inspired me to write this song I was thinking to put it out!! Like everyone else said, I love the harmonies as well. I was wondering if you you could add a little piano part in there. It would…"
I agree with what Aram said below, and had one other thought, which is to pay special attention to the transitions. They should sound fluid, so that all together the sections make sense as a whole, but should also leave enough room (could…"
This sounds really cool. I like the harmonies and while I know you wrote it for strings I think it would be really cool to hear it played by pump organ, accordion and guitar. Like a Tom Waitsian piece.
In terms of a song, I think…"